-looks around and narrows my eyes when I see a small figure moving through the grass- I got you now! -stalks up to it and pounces on it, killing the mouse-
Hey, Bear! I think I found fresh kill or something! -pokes Petal- I found it behind that tree over there! -flicks my tail towards a tree, then my tail tip unexpectedly falls off but I act like everything's normal-
Er...He's always been like that. Anyways...Smokey, that's a cat! We don't eat cats! -sees his tail tip fell off again- Really?! That's like, the 1,000th time this moon something's fallen off! -sighs and grabs some random cobwebs and sticks his tail back together-
-walks over to Petal and a deep growl rises in my throat and I unsheathe my claws- Oh great. It's the kit of Sky, the cat I hate the most. -rakes my claws across Petal's belly, then steps back to see what she would do, thinking I could kill her easily but slowly because I thought the only cats here were me, Bear and Smokey-
-looks outside to see the time of day and is instead gifted with the smell of blood, and I race towards it anxiously to see the kit slowly dying at the claws of a dark-coloured cat, and I feel a rumble in my throat as my eyes narrow and my claws unsheathe-
-yowls from the cave entrance- What are you doing?! -runs up to Hickory and Rams into her, knocking her onto her side and making her let go of Viper, my fur bristling and my ears flattened-
-growls and unsheathes my claws, a dark fog that seemed to smell like death surrounding my paws- What. Do. You. Think. You're. Doing. -glares at Hickory, fury gleaming in my eyes like a cold storm-
Answer me, or I swear I'll kill you! -flicks my tail towards Viper and Bear, not even noticing when the tip of my tail fell off again- Why did you do this, you piece of fox-dung?!
-growls- Fine, fine. Just put my neck back in the correct position, will you? -glares at Hickory, my eyes full of distrust- You know she killed my family, right?
Clans are evil! Why would I ever want to join one?! Every loner that lives around here knows Clans are full of murderers! And that cat right there proves it! -points at Hickory, my fur bristling-
-looks around nervously, suddenly realizing I had nowhere to go and no family to be with, since these evil cats had moved in and killed my whole family-
Now come here, you little-- -is cut off by an angry yowl and I leap on top of Smokey, growling and ripping at his stomach and throat- No cat hurts Hickory!
Good luck with that, fluff-brain. -hisses with annoyance- Now I'll have to find something to patch up my belly and my throat, once you've all given up on trying to kill me.
-flies down and grabs Smokey's head, hoping he wasn't dead yet, then sets it down and turns to face Pinepaw, my eyes glittering with anger, my claws unsheathed and my fur bristling-
-collapses, losing my wings but the wound heals and I look around in fear, knowing there was something dangerous near me but I couldnt see or hear it- (because if you kill Lostpaw in winged form it doesn't hurt Lostpaw but she'll return to normal instead)
He won't do it again -narrows my eyes at Pinepaw- will you? I'm sorry for what he did Smokey if you can't forgive him forgive me I'm sorry -grabs some dry moss to warm up the Kit-
Just go! -trys to hide the Fact of Love I have for this apprentice- I'm Sorry Smokey -gives him more moss to keep him warm then sits down staring into the skies and thinks: Oh Pinepaw I love you but how can I tell you-
I... I thought you were choking on something... are you sure you're okay? -touches nose with hers and blushes- I don't want my favourite cat to get harmed... -smiles weakly-
-sighs and starts to sing- (yeah) Sleep now little kit don't you cry now know that I will keep you safe sleep now -watches as the kit starts to sleep- hush now goodnight Smokey
-instead of sleeping I wander off somewhere, knowing I probably won't be welcome to sleep in the cave with Feather, especially with Hickory and Pinepaw there-
-turns into a cat again as I set him down- Here we are well that took along time :3 but where here
ReplyDeleteI don't care. I'm hungry! -looks around for something to eat-
ReplyDelete-brings a mouse to Pinepaw- I caught this well you were looking around -looks proudly at the 11 moon old apprentice m-
ReplyDeleteAww, come on, Feather, why'd'you gotta be better than me all the time? -pouts but doesn't hesitate to eat the mouse... all of it, that is-
ReplyDeleteYou can have it there's plenty around here! I found a place for camp -points to A clearing with A Waterfall
ReplyDelete-sighs and falls asleep right next to the small pile that was mouse bones-
ReplyDelete-Picks him up and takes him to the clearing were the Waterfall has a small cave not inhabited by any creature-
ReplyDeleteBet I can catch 4 mice! -goes hunting and in less than 3 minutes I catch 3 mice and a rabbit-
ReplyDelete-looks around and narrows my eyes when I see a small figure moving through the grass- I got you now! -stalks up to it and pounces on it, killing the mouse-
ReplyDeleteNice catch! -purrs- your good mom used to tell me that dad was Able to catch a Hawk
ReplyDeleteHmm. Well, you won't have to have any of this. -happily chows down on the mouse, my stomach soon feeling refreshed-
ReplyDeleteOk! -eats one of the mice I caught-
ReplyDeleteHey Petal, why don't you try and hunt something?
ReplyDelete-watches as the sun starts to go down- We should get se sleep you slept half the day and I'm tired
ReplyDeleteI guess so... -looks at Sky and Petal- Night, guys! You can sleep here too, if you want! -heads back into the cave, exhausted from hunting-
ReplyDelete(Yes, extremely tired from hunting one mouse)
What? No! I'm not going over there! There are terrifying monsters over there! -points to Pinepaw and Featherkit-
ReplyDeleteNight! -follows-
ReplyDelete-walks out from behind a rock, my mouth drawn back in a snarl- Sky, what are you doing here? Leave, and take that pathetic ball of fluff with you.
ReplyDeleteRose, I don't want to fight, but...I'm not leaving. And neither is Petal.
ReplyDeleteI gave you the option to leave. -growls- Now I will kill you! -leaps onto Sky and pins him down, my claws on his throat-
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ReplyDeletePetal, run.
ReplyDelete-pokes my head out- Petal in here!
ReplyDeleteO-ok. -runs into the cave-
ReplyDelete-narrows my eyes with hatred and tears Sky's throat open, blood rushing out of the wound like a river-
ReplyDelete-yowls in pain and my eyes glaze over-
ReplyDelete-comes out of nowhere and kills Rose instantly- (my new character Falcon Pinepaws dad) DIE YOU FOOL!!
ReplyDelete-steps out of the shadows, pricking my ears and looking around-
ReplyDeleteThe cats dead -sniffs- Do you smell that Hickory? That's Pine!
ReplyDelete-looking carefully at my father's muzzle, I nod and my whiskers twitch happily-
ReplyDelete-runs behind a tree and collapses, hoping Pinepaw wouldn't follow me-
ReplyDeletePetal? Hey, I'm sorry about that... Petal? Where are you?
ReplyDeleteHey, who are you? This is my territory! -looks at Pinepaw and puffs out my chest and tries to make myself look bigger by making my fur bristle-
ReplyDeleteYeah right, kit! Hey, have you seen a creamy coloured she-cat around here? Dark brown paws, ears, face? Anything?
ReplyDeleteHey, Bear! I think I found fresh kill or something! -pokes Petal- I found it behind that tree over there! -flicks my tail towards a tree, then my tail tip unexpectedly falls off but I act like everything's normal-
ReplyDeleteWait... what are you guys?
ReplyDeleteEr...He's always been like that. Anyways...Smokey, that's a cat! We don't eat cats!
ReplyDelete-sees his tail tip fell off again- Really?! That's like, the 1,000th time this moon something's fallen off! -sighs and grabs some random cobwebs and sticks his tail back together-
Uh.... -glances at the cave entrance- Ahem. . . .
ReplyDelete-peeks my head out- Pinepaw!
ReplyDeleteWhat?
ReplyDeleteIt's not my fault! I'm just different, right? It's not a bad thing.
ReplyDeleteCome on! Your father wants to speak with you!
ReplyDeleteI'm coming! -goes back into the cave-
ReplyDeleteCan we come? -pricks my ears and looks at the strange cats-
ReplyDeleteLet's just go anyways! -runs into the cave, accidentally losing a paw-
ReplyDeleteYou're so weird! -picks up his paw and puts it by the cave entrance, then walks into the cave-
ReplyDelete-walks over to Petal and a deep growl rises in my throat and I unsheathe my claws- Oh great. It's the kit of Sky, the cat I hate the most. -rakes my claws across Petal's belly, then steps back to see what she would do, thinking I could kill her easily but slowly because I thought the only cats here were me, Bear and Smokey-
ReplyDelete-yowls in pain and my eyes spark with terror, too scared to fight back, and yowls again, hoping somecat would hear me-
ReplyDelete-looks outside to see the time of day and is instead gifted with the smell of blood, and I race towards it anxiously to see the kit slowly dying at the claws of a dark-coloured cat, and I feel a rumble in my throat as my eyes narrow and my claws unsheathe-
ReplyDelete-turns to look at Hickory and draws my mouth back into a snarl- Get lost, fluff-brain.
ReplyDelete-looks closely at the bottom of his face and growls louder-
ReplyDelete-lashes my tail angrily- I said leave! Unless you want to fight, I recommend you listen to me!
ReplyDelete-hisses and drops into a fighting position Falcon had taught me-
ReplyDelete-leaps over Hickory and scrapes my claws along her spine- Fine. You had your chance to run, kit!
ReplyDelete-hisses in pain and bites desperately behind her, getting ahold of his throat and biting down hard, not entirely realizing what I was doing-
ReplyDelete-yowls from the cave entrance- What are you doing?! -runs up to Hickory and Rams into her, knocking her onto her side and making her let go of Viper, my fur bristling and my ears flattened-
ReplyDelete-frightened, I swipe out at Bear with my claws unsheathed, right at his neck, and throw him to the side with the force of the blow-
ReplyDelete-growls and unsheathes my claws, a dark fog that seemed to smell like death surrounding my paws- What. Do. You. Think. You're. Doing.
ReplyDelete-glares at Hickory, fury gleaming in my eyes like a cold storm-
-cowers and backs away, my eyes filled with fear-
ReplyDeleteAnswer me, flea-brain! -flings a stone at Hickory, my eyes filled with all the frost of leaf-bare-
ReplyDelete-looks away, unable to show that I couldn't hear, but knowing that by this cat's emotions, he was confused and enraged that I wasn't answering-
ReplyDeleteAnswer me, or I swear I'll kill you! -flicks my tail towards Viper and Bear, not even noticing when the tip of my tail fell off again- Why did you do this, you piece of fox-dung?!
ReplyDelete-whimpers and struggles to say a few words- I... save kit from death... -my voice is odd and cracked, as though I'd hardly ever spoken before-
ReplyDeleteYou killed my family! -gets into the same crouch that I would use if I was hunting prey-
ReplyDelete-my claws unsheathe once more and I ready an attack-
ReplyDelete-chuckles, knowing it would be almost impossible to kill me in battle- You'll probably give up after the first blow, scat-face!
ReplyDeleteFalcon: -races out of the cave and knocks Smokey over Raking his body And snaps his neck- NO CAT EVER ATTACKS HICKORY!!
ReplyDelete-growls- Fine, fine. Just put my neck back in the correct position, will you?
ReplyDelete-glares at Hickory, my eyes full of distrust- You know she killed my family, right?
Fine I'll make you an offer you value your life! My kit is deaf understood If you join us you can kill the cat who killed your mother....
ReplyDeleteWhy would I want to join you? Your kit just killed my father and my brother!
ReplyDeletetell me have you ever wanted to not loose your body parts? Or not to be laughed at.....
ReplyDelete-hisses- That's impossible. -sinks my claws into a patch of grass, ripping off several stems, imagining tearing them through Hickory's fur-
ReplyDeleteFeather: -sighs- I was told once of a cat who could make your wish come true to make the impossible Dream happen..... We need more friends....
ReplyDelete-looks at this cat in awe, thinking: 'How does he stay together like that? Is he a spirit? Or a mouse in cat's fur?-
ReplyDeleteWell what is your Answer? Smokey
ReplyDeleteWhat? Do I want to be normal? No! Then I'd be just like you losers! -doesn't look away from Hickory, my gaze burning with hatred-
ReplyDeleteI mean do you want to join us Feather: OwlClan is for cats like you Different
ReplyDeleteClans are evil! Why would I ever want to join one?! Every loner that lives around here knows Clans are full of murderers! And that cat right there proves it! -points at Hickory, my fur bristling-
ReplyDeleteFalcon: Then leave!
ReplyDeleteI can't until you fix my neck, fluff-brain!
ReplyDelete-growls-
Ok do it then (I like Smokeys Charrie)
ReplyDeleteYou need help?
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think, you idiot? -unsheathes my claws, really wanting to attack Hickory-
ReplyDelete-feels the rumble in my throat and unsheathes my claws once more-
ReplyDelete-helps him put his neck back on- Now go run along
ReplyDeleteHickory! Calm down
ReplyDelete-reads his muzzle and looks away, embarrassed, sliding my claws back in-
ReplyDeleteGo back into the cave!
ReplyDelete-looks up too late to notice his muzzle moving and stays where I was-
ReplyDelete-draws my mouth back into a snarl and glares at Hickory, swiping out at her-
ReplyDeleteFeather: -points to the cave with my tail-
ReplyDelete-falls down and gets a mouthful of dirt-
ReplyDeleteFeather: -helps Hickory up and Takes her to the Cave-
ReplyDelete-pads away, coughing and spitting up clots of dirt-
ReplyDelete-looks around nervously, suddenly realizing I had nowhere to go and no family to be with, since these evil cats had moved in and killed my whole family-
ReplyDeleteFalcon-starts to pad to the den-
ReplyDeleteNow come here, you little-- -is cut off by an angry yowl and I leap on top of Smokey, growling and ripping at his stomach and throat- No cat hurts Hickory!
ReplyDeleteFeather: PINEPAW! What have you done
ReplyDeleteI'm avenging Hickory! -yowls-
ReplyDeleteHickory is fine!
ReplyDeleteGood luck with that, fluff-brain. -hisses with annoyance- Now I'll have to find something to patch up my belly and my throat, once you've all given up on trying to kill me.
ReplyDeleteI'll never give up! Not until you're dead! -rips Smokey's head off-
ReplyDelete(OK THEN PINE GEESH)
Falcon: -drags Pinepaw back into the cave- THATS ENOUGH PINEPAW!
ReplyDelete(XD Wow.)
ReplyDelete-sighs- Why do you want me dead so badly?! You cats have already caused me enough suffering, haven't you?
Gross. Your head is speaking! -grabs Smokey's head and puts it in the stream nearby, waiting for it to drown-
ReplyDeleteFeather: Wait how can you be alive?
ReplyDeleteNo! -grabs the head-
ReplyDelete-drowns him-
ReplyDeletePINEPAW! NO! What have you done you Monster -walks away knowing no that I'm sad he will try to help me-
ReplyDelete-flies down and grabs Smokey's head, hoping he wasn't dead yet, then sets it down and turns to face Pinepaw, my eyes glittering with anger, my claws unsheathed and my fur bristling-
ReplyDelete-my eyes flash red (guess who has a shadoooowww) and I rake my claws across Lostpaw's neck-
ReplyDelete-turns into an owl- Lostpaw you saved him thank StarClan I thought he was done for -stands infront of Pinepaw- please don't hurt him he didn't know
ReplyDelete-the last remaining part of me keeps me from killing Feather- Leave now!
ReplyDeleteSTOP IT ALL OF YOU! -leaps on Pinepaw snapping him out of the Shadow form-
ReplyDelete-collapses, losing my wings but the wound heals and I look around in fear, knowing there was something dangerous near me but I couldnt see or hear it- (because if you kill Lostpaw in winged form it doesn't hurt Lostpaw but she'll return to normal instead)
ReplyDeleteLostpaw! -turns Into a cat again- PLEASE STOP PINEPAW! -looks at him my eyes filled with sadness-
ReplyDelete-turns into an Owl again and Takes Lostpaw To SkyClan camp
ReplyDeletePinepaw! Please Stop! -cries- I....I need you....
ReplyDelete-sighs and snaps out of it- What happened...?
ReplyDeleteYou almost killed a SkyClan apprentice.... Oh I'm so happy your back tho!
ReplyDelete-looks at Smokey- is he alive? I hope he is
ReplyDelete-wails after coughing up a load of water- This is so weird! I don't like not having a body attached to my head!
ReplyDelete-picks up the Body- Here Smokey -puts head on the body- Are you ok -my voice is filled with worry-
ReplyDelete-coughs again and shivers- I-I'm s-so c-c-cold! -looks at Pinepaw, my eyes wide with fear- That fluff-brain almost killed me!
ReplyDeleteHe won't do it again -narrows my eyes at Pinepaw- will you? I'm sorry for what he did Smokey if you can't forgive him forgive me I'm sorry -grabs some dry moss to warm up the Kit-
ReplyDeleteI-I'm sorry. I wasn't being myself... -shudders-
ReplyDeleteNo you weren't! Smokey if your cold you can come in to the cave
ReplyDeleteJust stay away from me, you careless idiot! -flattens my ears and glares at Pinepaw, already back to being aggressive towards these 'Clan' cats-
ReplyDeletePinepaw! Go into the cave! -my voice seems choked- NOW!
ReplyDeleteFeather, what's the matter? -looks at her worriedly-
ReplyDeleteJust go! -trys to hide the Fact of Love I have for this apprentice- I'm Sorry Smokey -gives him more moss to keep him warm then sits down staring into the skies and thinks: Oh Pinepaw I love you but how can I tell you-
ReplyDeleteI... I thought you were choking on something... are you sure you're okay? -touches nose with hers and blushes- I don't want my favourite cat to get harmed... -smiles weakly-
ReplyDeleteI'm fine it's just how am I meant to if I ever lead a clan if I can't stop cats mercilessly killing each other.... Do you remember MountainClan?
ReplyDeleteYou could let someone else lead it... -trails off for a bit and looks down at my paws uncomfortably- Not me, please...
ReplyDeleteNo Mother said to me that I HAVE to lead OwlClan it's my destiny
ReplyDeleteOh... Well, Falcon could probably help you. He's very wise, and older than all of us...
ReplyDeleteYeah -trys to hide the fact that falcon is going to die soon-
ReplyDelete-yawns- Yea right! You won't stop cats from killing each other. You're just going to be like all the other Clans!
ReplyDelete..... Goodnight Smokey
ReplyDeleteDid you hear that Pinepaw!
ReplyDelete-looks around- Wha? What's goin on?
ReplyDelete-comes out my head Bowed Down- Falcon is dead...
ReplyDeleteWell...er....good!
ReplyDeleteThat's not good you fish brain now sleep befor I make Pinepaw Drown you again
ReplyDeleteBut I don't want to sleep!
ReplyDelete-sighs and starts to sing- (yeah) Sleep now little kit don't you cry now know that I will keep you safe sleep now -watches as the kit starts to sleep- hush now goodnight Smokey
ReplyDeleteStop it. You're weirding me out, fluff-brain. -flicks my tail with annoyance-
ReplyDeleteOh sorry its a song mother used to sing to me... Well see you Tommorow
ReplyDeleteWell, it's stupid. And kind of creepy. And what is a song?! Are you some kind of kittypet?
ReplyDeleteYou never heard of a song.... I'm not a Kittypet well goodnight
ReplyDelete-instead of sleeping I wander off somewhere, knowing I probably won't be welcome to sleep in the cave with Feather, especially with Hickory and Pinepaw there-
ReplyDelete-Thinks:...... Pinepaw has lost so much-
ReplyDelete-hunts-
ReplyDelete-pads outside and uses my nose to find Pineshade and tells him that Feather was having kits the same way she told her-
ReplyDelete-gasps in surprise and brings the mouse that I caught to Feather-
ReplyDelete-stumbles, dropping Hawkkit, and yowls in pain-
ReplyDelete-Runs up to the kits- Are you ok?! What happened?
ReplyDeleteNever mind what Happened you need Rest!
ReplyDeleteT-there....w..as....a..a g-gray c-cat...and..-rests my head on the ground, the pain from my wounds making me stop talking-
ReplyDeleteHickorynoes Pineshade! I need help! -picks up the 3 kits- Don't worry your safe now -takes them into the cave-
ReplyDelete